Lake Windsor Middle school gets a surprise sinkhole
Middle school students took action as their school sunk into the ground. It was a Sinkhole on Lake Windsor middle school campus Monday, September 11th. Students ran to the rescue of fellow students as portables sank downward. This is the effect of excess ran on the campuses field’s.
Paul Fisher is a hero, for using his intelligence and help saved many of his fellow students, Paul helped rescue many of the students from other portables. Paul wasn’t the only hero there were many more middle school students who helped Paul save the other children. One of them is Joey Costello the brother of Mike Costello who was killed during a natural disaster.
As rock dissolves underground sinkholes appear, it’s like a big mud bubble under earth’s surface. Once the bubble pops everything on top falls down. These collapses are sometimes small but can be very large. The school did have some injuries but nothing serious; just some fractured bones and minor scratches.
October 17th, 2006 at 9:40 am
I really liked your first paragraph. It was very informative for people who are not sure what is going on!!
October 17th, 2006 at 9:41 am
Hi I really like your story. But I think you could write a little more. You could also make it a little more detailed. But other than that it is perfect. I know you could because you are smarter than that. But I like it.
~!brooke!~
October 17th, 2006 at 9:42 am
I like your story but I didn’t understand the first paragraph. Great Job anyways! =]
October 17th, 2006 at 9:49 am
WOW!!!! Gabby this made me think about how bad life can be at school when you are living in a city that has a bunch of rain storms. Also because it is verry informative about sink holes. So i like it, it is amazing. great job.
ErikaF
October 17th, 2006 at 2:08 pm
Hey Gabi your answers are very descriptive they are very good allot of supporting details nice job:)